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WRITE to Care Framework: Writing and Reading Integrating Technology into Education to Make A Difference in Our World.

By Kristi Rennebohm Franz, Sunnyside Elementary School, USA.

 

" Children develop language through interaction...they learn to talk by talking to someone who responds…They must therefore learn to write by writing to someone who responds. It will perhaps be possible for us to create classroom communities within school communities in which writing matters because it's done for real reasons by real writers who ache with caring for real response."
- Mem Fox


INTRODUCTION
Since 1993, our primary class has been using email on iEARN and between classrooms in our own school to learn to read and write. We started with reading and writing just text email messages with local to global iEARN students and teachers and now have added website publishing, videotape production, and live video conferencing experiences. Our telecommunications reading, writing, and communication all are focused on exploring curricular topics. We discovered early in this journey that by having children share their classroom curricular experiences through local to global telecommunications, their learning took on energy and inquiry beyond what we had ever imagined. The classroom became a place of "turbocharged" teaching and learning because of being connected to the real world experiences of others with whom we shared a passion for learning as much as we could together!
In the journey of mentoring primary children's use of telecommunications to develop literacy skills, I have developed the WRITE to Care Framework: Writing and Reading Integrating Technology into Education. The purpose of this framework is to encourage children's literacy skill development while participating in meaningful local to global telecommunications projects that make positive differences in their school, community, region, state, country, and the world. We use the iEARN network to generate and participate in WRITE to Care curricular projects.


THE WRITE TO CARE FRAMEWORK

WRITE to Care Framework is a process for integrating literacy (reading, writing, and communication/technology) essential learnings across the curricula in elementary schools. This framework integrates 3 components of teaching and learning:


1. Literacy
2. Curriculum
3. Service Learning


Using the WRITE to Care Framework in the interactive telecommunications environment of iEARN:


• enables students to meet literacy, communication/technology and other content area educational standards
• enables teachers to teach to educational standards
• energizes teaching and learning of teachers and students


The WRITE to Care Framework enables meaningful curricular use of:


• email telecommunications
• web page authoring for sharing curricular projects among students and teachers
• videoconferencing between classrooms and schools


IMPLEMENTATION OF WRITE TO CARE FRAMEWORK
In the iEARN community, teachers around the world connect their classrooms of students to do common curricular projects in partnership with one another. The Global Art Project and the Water Habitat Project are iEARN projects. We have also shared our Puerto Rico Comfort Quilt Project, our Nicaragua Peace Corps World Wise Schools Partnership Project, and Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. Peace and Friendship Project with other schools on iEARN.


We are finding that when children are writing and reading email on focused curricular topics in order to do collaborative service learning with local to global peers projects, they have a real life purpose and accelerated motivation to develop their literacy skills. They are caring more about writing, while writing about caring!


How and why do classroom curricular experiences, using the WRITE to Care Framework, provide a powerful process for children's literacy and communication development?


First, most children in the primary years have an innate sense of wanting to share what they know with others and learn about their world. When children have an opportunity to communicate with local to global peers as way of making connection to and learning about their world, they are eager to work on the necessary reading and writing skills that enable them to participate in that communication.


Second, when the children are writing about a curricular topic for which they have had meaningful learning experiences, they understand that the purpose of working on literacy skills is to be able to share those learning experiences that they know so well.


Third, the children are writing to known peers with an expectation that their writing will be read and that their writing will bring forth a reply and with telecommunications, the time frame for reply can be immediate. Instead of waiting weeks or months for responses by snail mail, they can have responses within a more immediate time frame, which enables children to have the context, content and purpose of their written messages intact when they receive a response.
Fourth, when the children receive a reply, it increases their motivation and understanding of how and why to work on reading skills, especially integrated semantic, syntactic and phonemic reading strategies, so that they can read the messages they receive. They want to know what their peers have to say. Because the email reply content is on a subject matter for which the children have background knowledge and because they know the text is going to be about a curricular context in which they have ownership and experiences, they access that prior knowledge and known context of what the email is about to predict words in the text.
Fifth, when children receive a reply from peers, those peers often tell them how much they learned from the messages that were sent. The text of reply email often affirms for children the value of the information and ideas that they have communicated. The children realize that their efforts to write about what they know are appreciated and important to others beyond their classroom. When a child realizes that what they know is valued by others, they become motivated to continue learning and writing about the curricular topic.


Sixth, the reply messages often invite further inquiry that inspires ongoing response and sometimes inspires further research in order to respond. Sometimes the inquiries in the email of peers include ideas the children hadn't initially thought about and can't be answered without doing more research on the curricular topic. Often, initiated online collaborative projects take the participating classrooms of children and their teachers beyond the learning goals initially imagined!


Seventh, the online collaboration among local to global peers in the process of doing a meaningful curricular project often leads to taking positive action with what they are learning. In the WRITE to Care projects, children learn to apply what they learn to make positive differences in the world. Being able to apply learning gained through reading,writing, and communicating on curricular topics, enables children to "go beyond information given... to use what they know in new ways and situations to build understanding.


Eighth, when primary children participate in curricular projects that include the WRITE to Care Framework, they learn that the literacy skills they are learning and using in school make a positive difference in their world.


The WRITE to Care Framework is a continually evolving journey in which the purpose is to unencumber the challenges children encounter in developing their literacy by engaging them in meaningful uses of reading, writing, and communicating that enable them to make positive contributions to their world in the present and the future. The goal of the WRITE to Care Framework is best articulated in the words of Steve E. Miller, author of Civilizing Cyberspace: Policy, Power, and the Information Highway (Addison-Wesley Publishing. 1996)
" It takes a special kind of connection to foster healthy human development, the kind that brings support, care, stability, encouragement, variety and challenge...We need an environment that provides models of mutual respect and assistance so we can learn empathy for others and the interdependence of our collective well-being... Telecommunications can bring us together... it can help create communities... united by common concerns... Telecommunications can allow people of all ages to continue learning and growing and expanding their horizons..which is lifelong learning at its best."


A complete version of the article above, can be found through links on web link
http://www.psd267.wednet.edu/~kfranz/.


* The WRITE to Care Framework curriculum uses the Harvard University Graduate School of EducationTeaching for Understanding Framework which has four main components to curriculum design: Generative Topics, Understanding Goals, Performances of Understanding, Assessments. See web link
http://learnweb.harvard.edu/ent/home/

WRITE to Care Framework Educational Standards, Compiled by Kristi Rennebohm FranzThe WRITE to Care Framework is designed to meet the following Washington State Essential Academic Learnings:


READING K-5
• The student understands and uses different skills and strategies to read.
• The student understands the meaning of what is read.
• The student reads different materials for a variety of purposes.
2-5
• The student sets goals and evaluates progress to improve reading.
WRITING K-5
• The student writes clearly and effectively.
• The student writes in a variety of forms for different audiences and purposes.
• The student understands and uses the steps in the writing process.
• The student analyzes and evaluates the effectiveness of written work.
COMMUNICATION K-5
• The student uses listening and observations skills to gain understanding.
• The student communicates ideas clearly and effectively.
The student uses communication strategies and skills to work effectively with others.
• The student analyzes and evaluates the effectiveness of communication/presentations.


The WRITE to Care Framework is designed to meet the following National Standards in Language Arts:


Standard 1: Demonstrates competence in the general skills
and strategies of the writing process
Standard 2: Demonstrates competence in the stylistic and rhetorical aspects of writing
Standard 3: Uses grammatically and mechanical conventions in written compositions
Standard 4: Gathers and uses information for research purposes
Standard 5: Demonstrates competence in the general skills and strategies of the reading process
Standard 6: Demonstrates competence in the general skills
and strategies for reading a variety of literary texts
Standard 7: Demonstrates competence in the general skills and strategies for reading a variety of informational texts
Standard 8: Demonstrates competence in speaking and listening as tools for learning


The WRITE to Care Framework is designed to meet the following National Educational Technology Standards

Standard 3: Technology productivity tools:
• Students use technology tools to enhance learning, increase productivity, and promote creativity
Standard 4: Technology communication tools:
• students use telecommunications to collaborate, publish, and interact with peers, experts and other audiences
• students use a variety of media and formats to communicate information and ideas effectively to multiple audiences
Standard 5: Technology research tools:
• students use technology to locate, evaluate, and collect information from a variety of sources
• students use technology to process data and report results
Standard 6: Technology problem-solving and decision-making tools:
• students use technology resources for solving problems and making informed decisions
• students employ technology in the development of strategies for solving problems in the real world


Click web link here for more about the WRITE to Care Framework's allignment to Educatioanal Standards


For more information about National Educational Technology Standards, see web link
http://www.iste.org/inhouse/nets/cnets/index.html


A Classroom Journal...


Each time we make a field trip to Sunnyside Ponds, we write about our observations of what is happening there and what changes we have noticed. As a whole class or in small groups, we write sentences for the pictures in our photo journals. Sometimes each person in the class is assigned a photo to write about for the journal. Then we put everybody's writing together to make the photo journal. Once a week we do writing in the computer lab. When we are writing about the ponds in the computer lab, we put a digital image slide show of our field trip on the big lab monitors so that, when we are writing, we can look up at the pictures of "life at the ponds" and remember what we saw.

PHOTO


Sometimes we work in pairs on our writing. We talk together about what we want to say. Then, while one person does the keyboarding, the other person is the editor who checks the words on the screen. We take turns being keyboarder and editor.

PHOTO


Sometimes, we work on our own. We each have our own computer disk so we can work on our writing in the computer lab and on our classroom computers. Each child does pond writing using our "Bird Print Writing Process". Each child's writing goes into his or her own individual writing portfolios.

PHOTO


We listen to each other's writing to learn what each other was thinking about the ponds. We help each other edit our writing and help each other practice our reading. We conference with our teacher or parent volunteers to revise and edit our writing. We put our finished writing into our writing portfolio binder notebooks. We send our writing as email and we make booklet of our email messages to use for classroom reading lessons. At our parent conference time, we each read our water habitat writing and email messages to our parents.

Bird Print Writing Process
As our primary class was using a writing software program to work on the Washington State Writing Standards, we initiated a framework for learning the writing process. This developed into the Bird Print Writing Process. Click web link here for a complete description


Puffin Prewrite . . . because the behavior of the puffin flapping its short wings to fly as it decides what to do and where to go next seems somewhat parallel to the process of getting words and short phrases for the ideas of our writing topic into print while we keep thinking about the whole story we want to tell. Puffins also live in colonies with one another, just as a central component of the Prewrite is to collaboratively talk together as a class or in small group about the writing topic.


Swan Draft . . . because the imagery of the swan gracefully floating across the water has metaphorical connection to the goal of doing a writing draft by just letting the sentences for each idea flow onto the page. The main focus is on creating the flowing sentence language for their main ideas with the understanding that editing and revising steps will be the time for close scrutiny of spellings, punctuation, and syntax.


Egret Edit . . . because the egret is a bird that has keen eyes and looks carefully and closely within its habitat to find its food, we decided it would be a good bird name for the first step in the editing process of looking carefully at our writing to identify sound spellings that needed book spellings. Because the egret strikes quickly with its beak to catch its prey, we decided it was a good bird name for the process of using a mouse clicks and keyboard strokes to underline the words needing book spellings. The keen eyes of the egret also remind us to use our keen eyes to look for words that needs capital letters and places where we need periods or other punctuation marks

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Owl Edit . . . because the owl has keen eyesight for looking carefully in many directions and because it is a symbol of wisdom and knowledge, we decided to use its name for the second step of editing process.


Wren Revise . . . because the wren is a bird that: 1) hops from branch to branch which reminds us of how we can "cut" and "paste" words and sentences in our screen document to move them from place to place; and 2) has a beautiful lyrical song which reminds us to make our words and our sentences together flow like music.


Peregrine Publish . . . because the peregrine falcon is a bird with incredible flying speeds, we decided to use its name for the final step in the writing process in which we make sure our document is ready to share with others and send on the speedy communication of email.

Reading Assessment Scores for iEARN Comfort Quilt Social Studies Project
Email Report on the Project to the Principal of Sunnyside Elementary School, Washington State


End-of-year scores by children reading email messages about our comfort quilt project are typical of the kinds of reading success children are achieving in the context of doing their iEARN web link Comfort Quilt Project work.


The first end-of-the-year comfort quilt project reading assessment example demonstrates students’ success when reading an email message that they composed as a whole class as a Comfort Quilt Project report to the school principal. The children composed the email message during a forty-five minute whole-class writing lesson. They re-read the message in small groups and then I assessed each child individually to determine his/her independent email reading ability .

May 30th Comfort Quilt Report Email to Principal
Reading Level 30-33

Email Message to Mrs. Watters
Subject: Comfort Quilt Report
Date: May 30, 2002


Dear Mrs. Watters,
We would like to tell you what we did and what we learned when we did the comfort quilt project this school year. First, we worked on making the comfort quilts. We drew pictures of our faces smiling. We used paper, pencils, and fabric crayons. We ironed the pictures onto white cloth. We sewed patches with vertical and horizontal spacers to make the quilts.
We sent the comfort quilts to Ed Gragert in New York City and to the children in refugee camps in Afghanistan. We showed our project on our website so other people could know how to make comfort quilts, too. Other schools decided to make comfort quilts for children so they could be a part of the project, too. Schools in California, at Racoon Elementary in Pennsylvania, in Miami Florida, and Australia helped us make comfort quilts for children in New York and in Afghanistan. We got email and pictures from the other schools to tell us that they made comfort quilts, too.
This Spring, we wrote about pictures we made about caring for the children in Chinese children’s hospitals in China. We also sent our caring stories in Chinese. Our classmate, Jimmy and his family, translated our English words into Chinese characters. They used a computer program called “Chinese Ninja Star Communicator”. We also sent four comfort quilts with the pictures and writing. Doctor Rennebohm, a pediatrician, took our quilts, artwork, and stories to the children in China.
An important thing we learned was how to make comfort quilts. We used our math because we had to count patches to make rows and use spacers and borders. We learned that helping is good thing to do because people feel good when you send comfort quilts. And we feel good when we give comfort quilts to other children because it makes them happy and that makes us happy. We learned how to sew and how to make smiling faces. We learned to read email and write and send email messages too. We learned to practice reading little words and a lot of big words like translate, education, comfort, quilt, important, make a difference, smiles, fabric, caring, hospital, and pediatrician.


From, Mrs. Rennebohm Franz’s Class


The school reading teacher estimated that the reading level of this email text was comparable to the text of Level 30 to 33 books used in our district adopted reading assessments. Level 30 to 33 is considered a third grade reading level in our district. First grade students in our district are considered at grade level in reading by the end of the school year if they can read a Level 18 text. Second graders are at grade level at the end of the year if they can read Level 28. I did reading assessments for accuracy and rate on twenty-five first and second graders in my multiage primary classroom. Thirteen of those students were in the Title I Reading Program and three of those students were in the Special Services Program.
Each child’s reading of the email message was scored for percentile of accuracy and words per minute rate. Their accuracy and rate scores were translated into the district student numerical scores for measuring student progress in reference to standards for reading. The district elementary school descriptors for the numerical scores of student progress and the score criteria for accuracy and rate are as follows:

District Numerical Reading Scores: Criteria of Learning Progress


Numerical Score Index


1 Below Standard
2 Working Toward Standard
3 Meets Standard
4 Above StandardReading Accuracy Score Critera


1 = 85% or fewer words read correctly
2 = 86-89% words read correctly
3 = 90-95% words read correctly
4 = 96-100% words red correctly


Reading Rate Score Criteria
1 = 30 or fewer words per minute
2 = 31-49 words per minute
3 = 50-89 words per minute
4 = 90 or more words per minute

 

Reading Assessment for May 30th Comfort Quilt Report Email to Principal
Reading Level 30-33


The whole class composite scores for reading Comfort Quilt Email Report to the Principal using the district scoring criteria are as follows:


Accuracy Scores
22 students scored 4
(Above the Standard for Reading Performance at this level of text)


2 students scored 3
(Meeting Standard for Reading Performance at this level of text)


1 student scored 2
(Working Toward Standard for Reading Performance at this level of text)


0 students scored 0
(Below Standard for Reading Performance at this level of text)

Rate Scores


9 students scored 4
(Above the Standard for Reading Performance at this level of text)


12 students scored 3
(Meeting Standard for Reading Performance at this level of text)


2 students scored 2
(Working Toward Standard for Reading Performance at this level of text)


2 students scored 1
(Below Standard for Reading Performance at this level of text)


Reading Scores for Comfort Quilt Project Email Reply from the Principal


The second assessment example demonstrates students’ reading success when reading the principal’s email reply to their comfort quilt project report. For this assessment, the children did not see this email message or hear it read until they were asked to read it aloud on their own in a one-on-one reading assessment with the teacher. This follows the protocol of our district adopted grade level reading assessments in which children are asked to read a text they have not read before nor had read to them. Another protocol in our district reading assessment is to give the child a brief prompt before reading aloud to introduce the topic of the text being used for the assessment. Similarly, I gave a brief introductory prompt. I placed the reading email text in front of each child at the beginning of his/her assessment saying that this was a reply email message from Mrs. Watters about the comfort quilt report the class sent her.


June 6 Comfort Quilt Email Reply From Principal Level 36-38

June 6, 2002


Dear Mrs. Rennebohm Franz’s Class,


I was so happy and excited to receive mail from you!! You have told me about the wonderful comfort quilt project you have worked so hard on all year. I am amazed at all that you have learned this year about caring and about making quilts. There are three important ideas I would like to share with you.


I love making quilts, too, and so I know a little about what you have learned this year. You must know a lot about math and about spaces and rows and columns to know how to put a quilt together. You also need to know how to speak and write so that you can share your ideas with each other. Deciding how to put the quilt together takes lots of cooperation. Good job learning math and practicing cooperation so that you could share your quilts with others.


One of the best parts of your learning from comfort quilts this year is that you shared this knowledge and information with other classes around the entire world. Knowing how to do something is important, but teaching others how to make a comfort quilt is even better. So many children have been touched by your project. Sharing what you learned by writing about it on emails around the world took lots of hard work. Bravo on a job well done!


I think the best part of this project is that you sent quilts to so many children. I know that they continue to feel loved and cared for because of your kindness. it also warms each of your hearts and my heart, and helps you know that you have made a huge difference in this big world.


Keep working hard on learning. It gives you the power to make differences in the world, to help others, and to be the ones who make changes in the world. I am so proud of all you have done!

Love, Mrs. Watters


The school reading teacher estimated that the reading level of this email text was comparable to the text of Level 36-38 books used in our district adopted reading assessments. Level 36-38 is considered a high third grade reading level in our district. I did reading assessments for accuracy and rate on the twenty-one first and second graders in my multiage primary classroom. Four students had left school before the ending of the school year. (One student reading rate was missing due to teacher error in forgetting to stop the stopwatch after the student finished reading. )

June Email Reading Assessment Scores
Text Level 36 –38
(High 3rd grade)


Accuracy (21 students)


17 students scored 4
(Above the Standard for Reading Performance at this level of text)


3 students scored 3
(Meeting Standard for Reading Performance at this level of text)


1 student scored 2
(Working Toward Standard for Reading Performance at this level of text)


0 students scored 0
(Below Standard for Reading Performance at this level of text)Rate (20 students)


6 students scored 4
(Above the Standard for Reading Performance at this level of text)


11 students scored 3
(Meeting Standard for Reading Performance at this level of text)


0 student scored 2
(Working Toward Standard for Reading Performance at this level of text)


3 students scored 0
(Below Standard for Reading Performance at this level of text)


These scores demonstrate that within the context of the comfort quilt project communication documents, students' reading progress exceeded the expectations for what first and second graders could do. The scores are even more significant indicators of reading success given the fact that this class included 13 students who received federally-funded Title 1 Reading Instruction support and 3 of those 13 students also qualified for Special Services support. The class also included students who received extensive counseling support.